My Unconventional Online Dating - Chapter 9
Xiao Nianyuan was nearly knocked off balance as Lian Qiushui threw herself into her arms. She calmly pulled Lian Qiushui away while asking, “How could there be ghosts here?”
The name “Sky City” suggested a righteous faction, so why would ghosts suddenly appear? Xiao Nianyuan was puzzled, but Lian Qiushui grew even more agitated, insisting, “There really is a ghost! And it’s a starving ghost!”
Xiao Nianyuan: “…A starving ghost?”
“Yes, a starving ghost!”
Lian Qiushui saw nothing strange about a starving ghost appearing here. After being pushed away, she grabbed Xiao Nianyuan’s hand again, trying to drag her inside. “If you don’t believe me, go in and see for yourself! There really is a starving ghost in there!”
Xiao Nianyuan glanced at her hand, attempting to break free, but Lian Qiushui held on tightly.
With a resigned sigh, she explained, “You’re covered in dirt.”
Lian Qiushui looked down at herself but paid no mind, continuing to tug at her. “Will you go in and look? There really is a starving ghost!”
Unable to resist, Xiao Nianyuan followed her inside.
As they approached, a loud “clang” echoed from within, like the sound of shattering ceramics.
The door had already been pushed open, and thick black smoke billowed out.
Xiao Nianyuan cautiously peered inside, the acrid smell of burning assaulting her senses.
Only after confirming there was no danger did she step in.
Lian Qiushui followed closely behind, her hand hovering near Xiao Nianyuan’s back as if ready to yank her away at the first sign of trouble.
Xiao Nianyuan’s attention was fixed ahead, so she didn’t notice Lian Qiushui’s subtle gesture.
The interior was a mess—walls, floors, tables—everything was blackened by the smoke.
The explosion had clearly been powerful, and the further they ventured, the more evident the devastation became.
Passing through another doorway, they reached the courtyard, where a pile of charred pots, pans, and utensils lay in the center.
Logically, if the explosion had occurred in the courtyard, the house shouldn’t have been affected. Yet the blast’s force had exceeded expectations, leaving even the interior scorched.
Xiao Nianyuan scanned the area but still saw no trace of anyone, let alone the starving ghost Lian Qiushui had mentioned.
It was strange. Earlier, she had walked around the streets but hadn’t seen anyone cooking or any smoke rising.
Yet the scene before her suggested someone had been cooking here until just moments ago, leaving in haste.
The mysteries of Sky City only deepened the more she explored. Xiao Nianyuan picked up a stick and poked at the smoldering remains of the fire, uncovering some burnt food scraps.
“Where’s the starving ghost?” Xiao Nianyuan asked.
Lian Qiushui frowned. “I definitely saw it earlier. How could it be gone now?”
“Are you sure you didn’t imagine it?”
“How could I imagine it?” Lian Qiushui retorted indignantly, pointing at her own eyes. “Look at my eyes—do they look like they’d deceive me?”
Xiao Nianyuan studied her eyes. They were bright and clear, but that didn’t prove anything. She couldn’t be sure whether Lian Qiushui had actually seen something.
If Lian Qiushui could see it, there was no reason Xiao Nianyuan couldn’t.
Moreover, if someone had caused an explosion here, they should still be nearby—they couldn’t have just vanished into thin air.
“What are you thinking about?” Lian Qiushui asked when Xiao Nianyuan remained silent for a long time.
Xiao Nianyuan mused, “I was wondering… if I blew up all their houses, would they come out?”
Lian Qiushui: “…”
The corner of her mouth twitched slightly as she stared at Xiao Nianyuan in disbelief, wondering if she’d misheard.
Xiao Nianyuan remained expressionless. Lian Qiushui rubbed her ears, suspecting the earlier explosion might have impaired her hearing.
Xiao Nianyuan proved she hadn’t misheard through action—she walked to the wall, dragged over a pile of dried firewood, and tossed it onto the smoldering fire.
The residual heat quickly made the wood emit black smoke.
“Isn’t this a bit too much?” Lian Qiushui hesitated. “What if it really explodes later?”
Xiao Nianyuan replied calmly, “If they come out, I won’t need to search for them. Whether the house explodes or not doesn’t concern me—I just want to meet the people here. Since they’re hiding, we’ll have to provoke them.”
After some thought, Lian Qiushui found her reasoning sound and stopped objecting. Instead, she enthusiastically helped gather more firewood.
Xiao Nianyuan watched as Lian Qiushui diligently piled all the wood onto the fire, even adding furniture—wooden stools, ceramic jars—anything movable was heaped on.
If another explosion occurred, these items would likely be blasted apart, with fragments potentially damaging the walls.
In the worst case, the house might actually collapse.
As black smoke slowly rose, Xiao Nianyuan found it too slow and asked, “Do you have a fire starter?”
Lian Qiushui nodded. “Of course.”
She pulled one from her waist and handed it over.
Just as Xiao Nianyuan was about to light it, a sharp shout rang out: “Freeze!”
A streak of white light shot toward her hand holding the fire starter.
Before she could react, Lian Qiushui stepped in front of her, coldly stating, “Think you can bully her? Did you ask me first?”
A little girl emerged from the corner, glaring indignantly. “Whose side are you on? Why help her?”
Lian Qiushui answered matter-of-factly, “I’m her master—of course I help her.”
Wu Jinghe paused, then turned to Xiao Nianyuan. “What are you trying to do?”
Xiao Nianyuan countered, “That’s my question. Why are you hiding from me?”
Wu Jinghe pouted. “You’re a stranger. Isn’t it normal to hide?”
“You didn’t just hide.” Xiao Nianyuan narrowed her eyes slightly. “You’re the one who made me fall into the water earlier, aren’t you?”
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I have mixed feeling about this story. In one hand, I absolutely adore the relationship between Xiao Nianyuan and Lin Qiushi, despite the rocky start, their relationship quickly evolve into a very soft and clingly relationship where Xiao Nianyuan get to indulge her need for physical contact through Lin Qiushi due to the fact that she’s less self conscious about it with her initially since she’s an NPC, and Lin Qiushi get to indulge in her need for companionship through Xiao Nianyuan, who is pretty introverted and as such don’t interact with other players or NPC in the game, so Lin Qiushi get to have all of her attention. As time goes on, they become pretty clingly with each other, both physically and emotionally.
My main gripe is that I don’t think enough time in the story is dedicated to their relationship
A good third of the story is dedicated to a rather boring mystery about a classmate of Xiao Nianyuan who’s using her photo to scam people online in order to ruin her reputation and take revenge on her over a perceived slight about his scolarship, but it feels pretty disconnected from the main point of the story, Xiao Nianyuan never actually exchange a single sentence with the perpetrator, outside of once, when he’s about to get caught.
The mystery of the sky city take another large chunk of the story, but in my opinion, it really wasn’t all that interesting. Xiao Nianyuan caught a glimpse of a silhouette that she recognized in the sky city early on, and then obsessed over the sky city to try to find that person and find out what’s the sky city is. While the story doesn’t explicitly said it, the person is most likely Ji Rongxue, who Xiao Nianyuan thought was dead. But the mystery is revealed in a rather boring fashion and so is the true nature of the sky city.
I also have a slight gripe with the ending, I do think that Xiao Nianyuan and Liu Qiushu relationship benefited a lot from the dynamic of one of them being a real person and the other being an NPC who was stuck in a virtual world, and while I always expected this barrier to eventually fade for an happy ending, I do have a slight problem with how it happened. Firstly, it’s a personnal preference but I would have prefered if they had started their relationship in the game, while Liu Qiushu was still an NPC, and secondly, the story kind of brush off all too quickly how Liu Qiushu was actually a real person with her memory sealed inside of the game, so it almost feels like Xiao Nianyuan end up with a different Liu Qiushu than the Liu Qiushu we got to see for the entire story (since their meeting happen in the last chapter).
Also, there is some hints of a relationship between Ji Rongxue and Jing Siyan (another NPC), but it’s never explicited, Jing Siyan get deleted due to a virus and there’s no resolution on that front, which is pretty sad.
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts! <3